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Friday, 21 September 2012

...When will i 'hear' you again...The last call...<3...by Abhisekh Beriwal



... Its not much, but something thats really close to my heart... Hope everyone would understand the feelings with which it is written.
" ...excerpts from my diary...dated 7th june'12...
...it had been a month that i didnt hear her voice... with a troubled heart and a chaotic mind... surrendered i ended, calling her up... The phone kept on ringing and just when i was about to hang up, she picked...
'why cant you just stop writing publicly on ur wall?'(which used to be d best thing she found in me)...
'i already have loads of problems in my life!'(all i ever wanted was to help her in her tough times too)...
'why dont u undrstand that its over?'(bt wen i said her the 3 words, i meant it forever)...
'please stop making me feel guilty, it was you who stopped making me feel special'(she still didnt realize that how can some1 comeup with new surprises evrey single day)...
'if you love me then why cant u smile for me that m happy, and stay away?'(but she was the reason i used to smile)...
...her anger made me numb...after a few minutes of silence finally i spoke...
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'i still Love you Anki'
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...but with those words, she didnt see d tears trickling down my face..."


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20 comments:

  1. Let her go... Now she is just somebody that you used to know... Live strong shakkooo... you deserve better

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  2. Lovely abhi... U do magic vd ur purple pen..
    touching..
    :-)

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    1. Thank u so much Sapna. :)
      but my pen is black in color. :p

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  3. lovly and heart touching.... Sometimes girls/boys dont understand what their patners want to say.....

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    1. Thank u. :)
      n i think its not sometimes. its most of the times.

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  4. baba, aap pagal ho gaye ho!
    anyways bhadiya likha hai:)

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    1. Aise naa kahiye baba. pagal ho hum dono k dushman.:p
      waise dhanyawaad. :)

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  5. touching...beautifully written :)

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  6. You seriously need to move on! now only time can make her realize her your worth not your tries! I wish very soon you get someone who deserves your love and reciprocate the same.:)

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  7. If it is actually personal, you created a fairy tale my friend, but may be with a wrong person.I know we cannot just forget people,but trust me, in the end..they only end in our diaries and writings.
    Touching indeed.
    ~Priyanka
    (the one you messaged on twitter)

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    1. Yes i know dat. i just hope that someday one of the fairytales, do come true. :)

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